Week 3 Monday 31st July

INTERIM PRESENTATION

We had to have 4 A3 posters to show our different ideas in the presentation. Here is what was left on my feedback sheet. (Will upload images of the posters in the next post).


WHAT IS THE CENTRAL ISSUE?

Cost of secondary education
Cost of tertiary education


IS THE CENTRAL ISSUE EASY TO IDENTIFY?

Images give a clear idea about the topic
Opportunity knocking on door one doesn't fit with the rest - I agree completely with this


IF SO, WHY?

Appreciate the subversion of sayings
Monopoly board works well. Kinda funny.
Agreed
Love monopoly one. Everyone wants to get to GO but once you get there it's expensive, not what you expected.


IF NOT, WHY?

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WHAT IS THE DESIGNER SPECIFICALLY COMMENTING ON ABOUT THE ISSUE?

Inequality in access to funds
Financial inequality affects peoples' abilities to find an education/graduate


IS THE DESIGNER USING PATHOS (EMOTION), LOGOS (LOGIC) OR ETHOS (AUTHORITY OF THE PRESENTER)?

Yes, but could be used more
Logos - it is quite clever. Like the monopoly and the student discount one.
Really like the door.
Bit of Pathos, focusing on Logos though.
I like the student discount one - funny that the discount is only given to those who can afford uni!



I'm quite happy with my feedback because I wasn't expecting much because I knew my designs were very preliminary and there was a lot more thinking to be done around those concepts and new ones to find something really effective.