Sunday, 6 August 2017

Week 3 Monday continued

Here are the posters I printed for today's presentation:







The feedback from Caroline and Fay was helpful, they definitely liked the tantalus subversion ones the best especially this one:


Feedback on where to go from here:

- Price tag on the cap could be confusing, maybe remove it
- Crop out the top portion of the art when it doesn't serve a purpose
-Try different ways of subverting the cap (painting/collage etc)
- Look up Gustave Dore
- Try making the graduation cap as if it is the holy grail: light pouring out, sparkling etc
- Could subvert pool to seem more rapid and rushing past, like it could be trying to pull him away even more.
- Think about what/who a modern day tantalus would look like or how this would be represented.. (pop art?)
-Take the green out of the type

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