Week 4 Monday the 14th Continued

Talking with both Fay and Caroline after the Interim presentations was good, and advice seemed to more or less line up more than in the past which was good.

The advice was to instead of having so many sets of hands, maybe focus on one set, and make it nice and big Also play around with other colours, Caroline showed me this:

Another Saul Bass work, and suggested I use blue and purple as my colours because not only has he used them but because blue is opposite of orange, and purple is adjacent to that.

I also need to make my body copy way smaller and play around with its positioning more.

Here is what I whipped up in the end of class, as part of my iterative process:

I also might take a look at changing the headline to be more about the limitations of poverty, and also might redesign these hands, and possibly alter the colours a little