Here are the posters I had for the presentation:
HERE IS MY FEEDBACK SHEET:
Do the visual strategies clearly communicate the aim?
I feel that in the orange poster, you could make the visuals slightly more related to education? The header text could be made in the shape of a graduation cap?
The sub-header is a bit lengthy
If not, why?
Not really getting the helping hand motif, looks like the hands are dragging down rather than helping.
(The hands are meant to be dragging down so at least that is clear, however, I may need to revise my heading still so that this is clear)
Not obvious enough
Is the designer using Pathos, Logos or Ethos?
Logic?
Logos
Are the posters visually engaging?
Yes, body copy on hands needs to move and hands could be arranged to be a little more dynamic.
Yes!
Yes, I like the hands, body copy placement needs work
If so, why?
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If not, why?
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What is the aim of these posters?
Raise awareness of those who can't afford to achieve their goals? Education? - second one is unclear.
If you come from a low-income household then you lack the access to higher education than others have?
Is the aim easy to identify through text?
Not so much in the hand one - we only find out about education in the body copy
Yes
Yes, text is good
Yes- through text
If so, why?
Good imagery
The hand poster
If not, why?
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What is the concept of these posters and is it easy to identify?
Poverty affecting education
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If not, why?
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